When it comes to writing, I’ll never argue that using fewer words is automatically better. But in most professional writing — and particularly in the marketing industry, where I work — it’s important to make every word count. That’s what I like to call writing tight.*
So consider the following phrases, temporal expressions that I encounter consistently:
on a daily basis
on a weekly basis
on a consistent basis
on a regular basis
on an occasional basis
on an intermittent basis
The trouble? Look closely, and you’ll see that these phrases are just adverbs dressed in extra clothes. My advice is to strip down a construction like this so that its “-ly” is showing.
on a daily basis → daily
on a weekly basis → weekly
on a consistent basis → consistently
on a regular basis → regularly
on an occasional basis → occasionally
on an intermittent basis → intermittently
Occasionally, I run across an example that sounds a little more bizarre:
The committee meets only on an as-needed basis.
The version below is shorter, yes — but also easier to read. Wouldn’t you agree?
The committee meets only as needed.
*(Note to pedantic grammarians: tight and tightly are both valid adverbs.)
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4 March 2010 at 12:47 am
Tyler
This is quickly becoming one of my favorite blogs.
4 March 2010 at 2:13 pm
GreenCaret
Thanks, Tyler. Hope it remains enjoyable — I’m in it for the long haul.
7 March 2010 at 7:59 am
Edmond
Oh, Joel. I hate to correct you (so awkward to correct the editor) but shouldn’t that be “as neededly?” Tsk, tsk. You were doing so well with your first two posts.
I love rants! Rant on against cheap, overused words and conventions.
Edmond
P.S. Great icon for “writing tight.”
7 March 2010 at 8:06 am
GreenCaret
Dear Edmond: You are a dork. I mean this on a sincere basis. Best wishes, Joel
7 March 2010 at 8:59 am
Edmond
My goodness. I hardly think I deservedly that.
7 March 2010 at 11:57 am
GreenCaret
You know you did. Now get back to work on that novel of yours.
13 February 2015 at 3:18 pm
David J. Bauman
Joel, I finally found a little downtime, so I am enjoying a stroll through more of these posts. I recently started a little freelance editing on the side, so your hints and reminders are timely! And I have to admit, even the comments are fun.
13 February 2015 at 3:29 pm
GreenCaret
Awesome. I’ll have to recommended a few of my best resources to you! And thanks.
13 February 2015 at 3:56 pm
David J. Bauman
And now after your poetic, and sensual post on aubergine, well I find myself hungry,
and I think my heart is racing. Time for me to get back to work!
13 February 2015 at 4:32 pm
GreenCaret
Hahaha. Excellent. My work here is done. 🙂